Professor: Denise
Gamal
Over the last ten years we
have seen an increase in student loans; because of this we also have seen many
discussions of whether if it is worth taking a loan for a higher education. Words
like college-debt scare many students since they are worried about the
decisions have made, these people see college debt as one more problem in their
life and they argue that there is no sense to take a loan for higher education.
They believe that after college it will be difficult to find a job, and pay
their bills, and even more for a debt for their higher education. However,
college debt is the risk that some people have to take in order to reach their
goals. For the truth is that most people with a college degree have better job
opportunities since they are a lot more skilled in some areas like reading,
writing, leadership and analytical skills. In this essay I will demonstrate
that college debt is worth it since the person is investing in his future and
will have more job opportunities. Moreover, once you have bachelors or
college degree you become a better citizen, educated, and you may have some
debt after college but it will worth.
In the Essay “When
College May Not be Worth the Cost: Examining Student Loan” written by Sarah
Kavanagh claims that two-thirds of the students who earn a bachelor’s degree
borrow to pay for higher education — many without being aware of how that debt
may cripple them later. Moreover, in her essay she pointed out that a college
degree statistically remains a good lifetime investment, but it often comes
with an unprecedented financial burden, and I have mixed feeling about it. I
agree that some students take a loan without being aware of how they are going to
pay it later. That is why students are worried about the decisions they took of
take a loan; for instance, there are some students that are not even sure
enough why are they studying. Other students do not feel enough motivation
going to college, and these people still going to college and taking loans,
those are my reasons why on one hand I completely agree with Sarah Kavanagh;
but on the other hand, I still insist that a loan for a higher education it is
worth if the student is very motivated, and have known what their goals are,
and then the loans won’t become as much of a financial burden.
For instance, if
you are a student that is thinking whether or not go to college you have to
think twice on your preferences. Think what do you like to do the most, and
this will help the student to find a job after she/he graduates. There are many
tests that a high school graduated can take without cost, in those test you can
see your preferences and skills. There are many tools beside those tests to
figure out whether you should go to college, and tools that show how much the student
will pay after they graduate. These tools will help you to analyze whether a
good decision is or not; furthermore some debt tools show people how much your
payments will be after you graduate. The point here is that there are many
resources but high school graduates are too young make this kind of decisions
which that could enhance or ruin your life. Other point is that young people
are not as well informed about the risk to take a loan. High schools should
have programs to explain these problems. If you are very good at something, and
you are highly motivated about going to college then there should not be worries
on how to pay for college.
For those students who take a loan
maybe less than one third are worried after gradate on how to pay a college
debt, moreover there are students who are enjoying the privilege to be a
professional, whether they have debt or not.
Yet some readers
may challenge my view insisting that College
debt is not worth it because the entire system encourages students to take out any kind and amount
of loans they need without worrying how they will pay them back. But I am
clearly explaining that loans are not for everybody. They are risky, but if you
consider yourself as a good at what are you studying then you should not think
twice to take a loan because the college debt it is worth it.
In recent
discussions of college debt, a controversial issue has been whether young
people should take a loan or not. In my opinion people who take a loan live in
debt for a few years, and this is true, and I cannot deny it, but that is the
sacrifice which some people have to do in order to achieve some goal. In order
to succeed you have to give up something to gain another; for example you will
give up some money from your pay check in order to pay your debt. But is this
view realistic? What are the chances of this actually being adopted? Well, let’s answer these questions; imagine
living in debt for a while, for certain time maybe you will be short of money
because you are just starting your career path, and also because you will be
paying your debt, but, moreover, no one can take away the fact that you are Engineer, Architect, Accountant
or whatever career you have been chose to study.
“Real education must ultimately be limited to men who insist
on knowing–the rest is mere sheep-herding.”
Ezra
Loomis Pound (1885-1972) U.S. poet.
Like this quote says, the education
is for people who are thirsty for knowledge, the same on taking loans, college
debt it is worth it for those who really want to succeed and are willing to
give up something in order to gain something better.
In the article “The
Question You’re not Asking: Should You Go To College?’ written by Robert
Brockway claims that in the long term
there is not too much difference in terms of money between a person who
graduate from high school and a person who earn a bachelor’s degree, at the end
the person who earned a bachelor’s degree will earn about three hundred
thousand dollars more in their whole life, which he argue that does not make
any sense. From this perspective I respect their point of view, but at this
point I would like to raise some objections that I have been inspired by the
skeptic in me; some people may feel like I have been ignoring the complexities
of the situation. The point here is not the money. Obviously with a bachelor’s
degree you will earn more money in long and short term, but this is all about
the vocation, not money. You can earn money working at any job, but you only
live once so if you feel that you will be happy going to college, sacrificing
some things, and following your dreams. Then it is the best option for you to
take a loan. I assure the debt will worth it.
Student going to college develop the criteria,
way to think, and become a well-informed citizen. Besides of your opportunity
to get a better job you are investing in your future, so you are learning to
make the best decisions for your life. “Education is the most powerful
weapon which you can use to change the world” .Even if you have debt because
your higher education, nothing will change that you are educated. They can take
our money but they can never take our minds!
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Robert. "The Question You're Not Asking: Should You Go To College?" Cracked.com.
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Charles. "Are Too Many People Going to College?" The American
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Audience
This essay is for Sarah Kavanagh, and Glenn Reynolds, also for my
classmates who think that college debt it is not worth it.
Purpose
My purpose is to influence my opinion over my audience.
Role
I am in the role of college student.
Thesis
I will demonstrate that
college debt is worth it since the person is investing in his future and will
have more job opportunities. Moreover, once you have bachelors or
college degree you become a better citizen, educated, and you may have some
debt after college but it will worth.
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